TOM DIED!!!!!!!!!! *graphic description of death

broken_words · Post by **broken_words** » Mon Jun 20, 2005 8:30 pm

I just found out my friend Tom died...heres' a poem...

Pieces here,
and pieces there,
help me look,
but do not stare.
One last call,
"I love you guys,"
one last breath,
but no good-byes.
One friend left,
he saw the pain,
he must live,
with all the shame.
CPR,
but he's already gone,
pieces left,
on the steep cliffs lawn.
Pieces here,
and piece there,
oh dark day,
you're just not fair.
We'll miss them both,
long from now,
we can see,
how short our bow,
let them teach us,
how short life is,
but let's not forget,
what we miss.

Here's an explaination....
they found pieces of Tom on the side of the hill, cliff thing that his car went off of ... his friends went looking for them (Tom, Nick and Cameron)...they wanted help looking, but when they got there they were told not to stare b/c of all the blood...Nick died, and so did Tom...Cameron lived. Tom was on the phone when it happened and he told the person he was talking to , to tell his parents he loved them and his family. Cameron lived, and he feels horrible, b/c he saw them die and they were drinking and driving. Cameron tried CPR on Nick...but he was gone.

VowsOfSadness · Post by **VowsOfSadness** » Tue Jun 21, 2005 4:40 am

wow. Im so sorry. Your poem is very good. I hope you will get through this hard time. **********HUGS IF WANTED**********

mallie · Post by **mallie** » Tue Jun 21, 2005 7:55 am

I'm sorry for your loss. I hope you're coping okay.

DecemberLivy · Post by **DecemberLivy** » Tue Jun 21, 2005 4:24 pm

I'm so sorry *gentle hugs*
very well described poem, well done
PM me if you want to talk, i know what its like to lose someone

love always, livy

Bathelina · Post by **Bathelina** » Tue Jun 21, 2005 8:43 pm

:1hug: i'm so sorry to hear that happened, it must be really hard to deal with.

your poem was very emotional and well written

i hope you're okay
love and hugs
hannah x

broken_words · Post by **broken_words** » Wed Jun 22, 2005 12:09 am

Thank youall for all of your support...and i'm coping ....decently... hugs needed!

NobodyToYou · Post by **NobodyToYou** » Wed Jun 22, 2005 3:04 am

lots of hugs

ru290 · Post by **ru290** » Wed Jun 22, 2005 6:50 pm

**Sits with you**
i'm sorry for ur tragic loss

Midnight Tigress · Post by **Midnight Tigress** » Wed Jun 22, 2005 9:20 pm

*hugz*
idk what to do or say
i'm so sorry

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TOM DIED!!!!!!!!!! *graphic description of death

TOM DIED!!!!!!!!!! *graphic description of death

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